Cause I'm Interested in 'MaMiie and Lazgasana' :)

ini note sebenar'a lanjutan dari note "my versi about bad habits MaMiie and Lazgasana" yg baru kelar skrg, hhe
kali ini isi'a ttg smua kebaikan'a kita -versiku-. sebenar'a ga enak ya bcra ttg kebaikan kita? keliatan sprti meninggikan dri sndri. enakan bcrain ttg kburukan ya? kita bisa intropeksi diri (ato emg doyan nghina nih? Hha :D)
emg uda rencana sblum'a sii, pgn ngeluncurin note ttg 'baik-buruk'nya kita. so we will know everything about us

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-Mami (Nomenrita Panjaitan)
sisi baik'a sii bnyk, gmn ga?, buruk'a aja cuma 2 ya mi? :D
tp ga apa, kita list aja sebisa'a trsebutin.
` baiik uda psti, pengertian *mami bisa ngerti dgn jiwa remaja yg labil seumuran Lazgasana*
` pinter d smua bidang, *masa sii?* ;)
iia, aku paling suka dgn pinter'a mami d bidang bio *hrs d tiru*, english *ga tahan aku*, n cara mendidik anak *saluut mi ama ajaran'a ama adek2 d rmh, say no to "main tangan"!*.
pnter nyanyi, kecolongan dngar mami nyanyi d koridor sklah. ya kn mi? gmn dgn lagu 'soledad'nya yg pas ngawas ujian mi? hha:D. masii ingad ga?
` bisa menempatkan diri dgn benar d brbagai kondisi.
aku heran dgn prinsip mami yg gmauk mandang mata org yg baru d knl'a. tkud trhipnotis iia? :p
` ga peliit
malah aku suka dgn prinsip mami yg gmauk mngharapkn pemberian ato hadiah dr org lain.
` brjiwa humor yg tinggiiiii *poin plus nih*
suka aku dgn humor mami yg lucu tp rngan :D. apalagi klo mami uda perang ama abg open, jd ngakak :D
suka juga dgn phrases mami, I.G.G.I, 99 ninety nine, tabak koloor.
` easy going
mngkin krn trbawa jiwa muda ya? ibu2 gaul inih :)).
aneh, mami sllu nganggap dia uda tua, pdhal masii umur hmpiir 38 jugak, kidding mi :D

uda gabisa lagii aku nyebutin'a, trlalu bynk. pkok'a mami jagoo! bisa jadi cerminan org lain
mami jago deh! 4 thumbs-up for you mom. love you mamiie
` org'a unik
suka lompat2 ga jelas
` pnteer mate *matika mksd'a*

-dila (Fadhilah Situmeang)
` maniis *smpe bnyk semud'a*
` pnteer masak *makasii indomie'a ya umi*, pnter menggmbar juga
` mementingkn kpntingan brsama *pas agro, mau bwa bnyk2 barang*

-gez (Greselita Yolanda Junianty Purba)
` maniis, cntiig, rancaak, beautipul
` pande bana
` bisalah d ajak brcanda
malah kdg paling heboh. seriing merengek, pdhal dia sndri yg buad, ckckck :D

-hanna (Hanna Carolina Simangunsong)
` pinteer mate
` pinteer nyanyi
pnter juga nyembunyiin ssuatu, oalaah :o
` gilak *dlm arti yg positif*
mn ada gilag yg positif ya?

-ike (Ike Rahmadani)
` cantik, tnggi, langsing *cocok model susu penggemuk bdan, hha brcanda*
` pandee lah
` pinter olahraga *sainganku ini*
sainganku pulak?! Ckckckc

-juni (Juni Ertania Sari)
` cantik, maniis, beautipul *paling laku, hhe , iri saia*
` org'a terampil
` pnter brpenampilan, rapi

-velin (Leviana Velin Nainggolan)
` baiik kali, sabar *hamba Tuhan sejatii*
aku sering curhat ama dia , dia bisa ksh nasehat.
` pinteer
` polos, lugu, penuh kasih

-aku (Lisandy Yunita Nababan)
punya ku prlu ga sii? :p
ngga kn?

-lysda (Lysda Warni)
` tmn yg baik utk menggosip
saking jabir'a hha
` sederhana, ga neko2
` baiik

-open (Mulia Novendro Damanik)
` pelawaak kali
mampu mengocok peruud
` bisa d andalkan
dlm hal apa ya? gtauk dehh hha:D
` kdg dewasa juga lah

-salbot (Nurullah Salim Piliang)
` pande mate
` pande mengaji
` lucu jugakkk

-poppy (Poppy Julianty Situmorang)
` baik, lugu
` pnter ngerjain
arrrragggghgggghgaaar
` bisa d andalkan
dlm bidang memutarkan buku, brgaya sok cool. hhahahha:D

-putri (Putri Perdana Sari)
` pelawak lah
saingan c yesii juga
` pnter joget
` easy going, sdrhana
(\_/)b

-ranto (Ranto Bangun Nainggolan)
` pinter ngerjain pkrjaan rmh
nmpak kalii ...???
*nampak kali apa'a?
` penuh dgn lelucon konyol
` ganteng *menurut cpa gnteng ini?* hha

-ricky (Ricky Wendi Sihombing)
` kerreee *kurang 'n' nya, jadi? Keren*
` lucuuu
apalagi dgn jerawat'a
` baiiik
nma'a juga ito ku.

-roni (Roni Sumar Said)
` tnggi
` lucu
` agak pndiam
setidak'a bs mengurangi kributan d kls

-yesi (Yesika Tresia Manurung)
` pandeee mtk, nyanyi
` humoriis
` dlm prjlnan mnjdi hamba Tuhan yg sejati sesuai dgn kehendakNya
hhahahha : dasar porlao!

-hanes (Yohanes Martin Hutabarat)
` pande musik
` cool
` gnteng *kta c gez*

smpe situ aja dulu ya, capek ngetiik'a.

you are apart of my life .
I love you just the way you are.
You never be change in my heart.
Love you yaaa

Our Western Name

Ide ini uda lama muncul. Tapi baru tadi teringad di angkot sama aku, Ogek, dan Hanna.Ini tentang nama (red: anakanak sepuluh satu) nginggris kami. Biasalah numpang eksis gitu, supaya agak kerenlah dulu nama kami yang tak seberapa itu aka PH3 ParHutaHutaHian. hahahaha :D

Panoknoti lah dan cermati! Soalnya western name nya itu pronounciation nya, bukan spelling nya. Yak?
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1. Abie Amadea Harahap --> Ebay Amedaye Herayhep
2. Adelina Limbong --> Edelayne Laymbong
3. Aldiansyah Putra --> Eldeyansyeh Putrra
4. Asmer Novrianto Situmeang --> Asemer Nouvrayanto Saytumeang
5. Dumaria Sartika Putri Sitinjak --> Dumaraye Sartaike Putray Saitainjek
6. Eunike Sianturi --> Eunayke Sayanturay
7. Fenny Novita Meysabed Sianturi --> Fennay Novayte Meysabed Sayenturay
8. Greselita Yolanda Junianti Purba --> Gerezelayte Yolainde Junayantai Purbe
9. Hanna Carolina Simangunsong --> Ann Carolayne Saimangunsong
10. Ike Rahmadani --> Ayke Rahmadayne
11. Lisandy Yunita Nababan --> Laysanday Yunayte Nebayben
12. Lucia Nia List Etnisia Baene --> Lusaye Naye Laist Etnisaye Beyane
13. Muhammad Fikriansyah --> Muhammed Faikrayansyeh
14. Mulia Novendro Damanik --> Mulaye Novendro Demaynik
15. Nurpadila Siregar --> Nurpedayle Sairegar
16. Nurullah Salim Piliang --> Nurullah Seylaim Pelayeng
17. Ronida Simanjuntak --> Ronayde Saimanjuntak
18. Sri Maini Pardede --> Sray Meyayne Perdayde
19. Yesika Tresia Manurung --> Yesayke Tresaye Menurung
20. Yohanes Martin Hutabarat --> Yohanez Mertain Hutebayret

Hahaha :D nama bulek pun gak gitu.gitu kali ya kan? Lebay kali pun :D~sandy

Koloni Seonggok

Kali ini aku membuat puisi. Walaupun tema puisi ini sangat, amat sangat, luar biasa sangat, sangat sangat ya ampun, SANGAT BIASA! Bahkan mungkin SD udah disuruh buat puisi yang bertemakan hal-hal sederhana yang ada di sekitar kita. Heleeh :-/

Tapi tak apa lah ya, ambil sisi positifnya aja. “Oohhh walaupun si Sandy ini buat puisi yang temanya sederaha, tapi biarlah. Hitung-hitung melatih diri dan mencoba buat berpuisi,” trengtrengtreng kayak gitulah maunya kalian (red:pembaca) tanggapi puisiku yang tak seberapa ini. Atau boleh juga “Ahh, nggak mantap si Sandy ini, bikin puisi yang biasa-biasa aja. Lagian sok-sok buat puisi pulak tuh,” kekekekkek :D. Kembali ke studio, terserah Anda mau pilih mana :p

Naah, jadi yang melatarbelakangi aku buat puisi ini adalah,,,, (treeeeeng, kasih tau nggak ya? ish, lebay hahha) suatu sore nan cerah ketika sang dewa langit mulai memayungi cakrawala dengan rona lembayung yang bersinar kilau berpantul dari pasir-pasir permadani pantai, tapi sayangnya aku lagi nggak di pantai heheh *ga jelas kali, latarnya aja uda kepanjangan, sand! ; kata pembaca*. Uda ahh, pokoknya suatu sore kakakku nyuruh bersihin pekarangan sekaligus sampe selokannya. Ya, begitu! Terinspirasi aja. Blablablablaa... *ntar kepanjangan, malah ntar malas bacanya. Lagian uda pada ngotot nih mata yang baca kakaka* Langsung aja.

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Koloni seonggok

Duduk manis merana

Dalam wahana kehidupan air depan rumah

Tanpa riak, tanpa arus

Berteriak dalam ketidakpedulian makhluk berakal

Yang selama ini dipuji sempurna

Koloni seonggok

Tanpa bentuk, antahbarantah

Hanya sekumpulan mereka yang senasib

Bekas sesuatu dari sang tokoh hidup

Menenteng seremah asa akan balada nanti

Terkepung dalam ranah hidup keji

Kolono seonggok

Ingin berteriak menerkam

“Pindahkan aku dari sini!”

“Pindah kemana aku seharusnya berada,”

“Tak ingin kau anggap aku penyusah,”

“Atau, boleh kau pergunakan aku,”

Koloni seonggok

Menangis menunggu dalam lara

Malaikat berbaju kuning

Menjemput bersama teman senasib

Menawarkan nirwana penantian

Mengakhiri riwayat hidup kami yang bengis

Koloni seonggok

Bertanya mengapa dan bagaimana

Bahkan si piala adipura

Sekonyong-konyong hanya sebagai topeng

Tameng prestasi dan kekreatifitasan

Bagi insan-insan yang munafik

Koloni seonggok

Tersikut dalam kata-kata mimpi

Kerinduan akan terbitnya dunia abadi

Terkekang dalam larutan riak kehidupan

Menanti sebuah lentera asah

Bersama kepingan rasa kelam gulita

Mohon bimbingannya. Para kalian yang pintar dalam sastra, bantu aku ini. Mananya yang salah? Mananya nggak pas? Ato perlu ada yang diganti, gitu? Soalnya masih amatiran kalo tentang yang kayak beginian.

Eigth Years Ago

Eigth Years Ago

By : Lisandy Y Nababan

X-I

Everybody around looked like busy at their own this afternoon. But the other hand with a girl who was standing with a big packing under a tree. Seems she didn’t care at all, just seeing the view of around.

The girl with black, smooth, and long hair, white skin like babies’, round beautiful eyes, and an innocent face looked more beauty when the wind was blowing over her hair.

She is Enjola Moongyna, and everybody called her Enjola. She is about 17 years old. Enjola looked like a rather unfriendly girl. It means she usually talked less with other people, but actually she was a kind girl. However, she couldn’t express her kindness. So everybody thought that she was an arrogant girl.

Enjola was waiting for someone to pick her up to her step father’s house. Her mother was a widow, and she has just got married with a kind man. The man had a success wine company in a town not far from Enjola’s house. But Enjola disagree, because she knew that her mother wanted to be the man’s wife because she was a materialistic woman.

Finally, a boy arrived. The boy was a good-looking one. He had a short wavy hair, white skin, a peacefull face, perfect body, and especially his killing smile. Enjola was stunned to looked at him, the boy did either.

On the way, that boy didn’t stop to looked at Enjola by the spion-glass in the car’s dashboard. Seems, he was felt in love by the first sigth with Enjola. Enjola realised that the boy looked at her. It made Enjola uncomfortable. So she pretended to go to a toilet, but she ran away. The boy knew it, and he ran after Enjola then. But finally, Enjola was able catched by the boy.

“Don’t run away! You should meet your parent, although you disagree if they got married,” said the boy and took a long breath.

“Do you have some money? It’s so difficult to still alive without any money, right? But maybe it will change if you are in or over twenty years old. Maybe you have a job, so you have some money, and so you can run away. But don’t run away for this time. You are too young,” continued the boy.

Enjola didn’t give any respon, she just asked her ownself in her heart. “Why? What’s wrong? I’ve just believed him. Even, if he says that this earth is a square one, maybe I’ll let my heart believe him. I like under his magic. His sense is so strong,”

After they arrived, finally Enjola got the boy’s name. He was Vangeuno Myson, and everybody there called him just Geno. Geno was about 18 years old. He was one of Enjola’s father’s employee. He was very friendly.

Enjola had a young sister from her step father, named Vinessia. She was a very beautiful girl and friendly. Everybody there loved her, include Enjola’s mother. But Enjola dislike Vinessia, cause her overactive talk and very childish.

In recently days, Enjola knew that Geno and Vinessa were a close-friend. Enjola was so envy everytime she saw Geno and Vinessia both together. Especially, after Enjola school at the same school with Vinessia, everyday Enjola must saw Geno picked Vinessia up after school. Yes, she was jealous. Maybe she began fall in love for the first time and maybe by the first sight with Geno.

Actually, Geno didn’t love Vinessia, but Vinessia did. Geno liked Enjola much. Geno saw Enjola by inside, that Enjola was a goodheart girl, eventhought she couldn’t express. So Geno approached Enjola. He always entertained her, when she sad. He always accompany her, when she got disapprove with everything about Vinessia and her mother. But sometimes, Enjola was unfriendly. He knew her by inside and outside. He knew everything about her. He understand. Their feeling for each other got stronger.

One day, Enjola couldn’t find Geno there. Then she asked Vinessia, she said that Geno have just gone to a far place to continue his study. Enjola cried. She searched him quickly. She searched in their special room -that only they both know it- and to the train station. But she still couldn’t find him. She went to the beach -that they both ever have been there- and cried then. “Why? Why you leave me alone? Leave me without saying goodbye. How? How am I then without you? Can’t you see how much I crazy looking for you? Can you you imagine how much I miss you then?” said Enjola stammerly while was crying.

But in fact, Geno has given a letter for Enjola to Vinessia before he gone, and asked Vinessia to gave it to Enjola. That letter was about asking Enjola to come to the train station for their farewell. But Vinessia hasn’t give it to Enjola yet. So Enjola thought that Geno left her without say goodbye.

Eigth years later...

One day, Geno came back.

“Sist, this is Geno. He come back,” said Vinessia happily.

“How do you do,” said Enjola to Geno, she couldn’t hide her hate-looking.

“What does it mean ‘how do you do’?” asked Geno. He was so confused and now he also couldn’t hide his hate-looking finally.

Enjola didn’t answer. Yes, she hate Geno for his leaving. The same thing with Geno, he thought that Enjola didn’t ant to come to train station. It caused by Vinessia.

There was a new employee in Enjola’s father’s company, named Elvano. He was a very kind people. And he fell in love with Enjola, but Enjola didn’t. He knew that Enjola loved Geno and Geno loved Enjola.

“I often see you cry caused Geno. But you still love him! Look at me! Consider me! I’ll not make you sad,” said Vano in one night.

Enjola give no answer.

“Why? Why do you love him much?” asked Vano.

“You know? I’m sad when he looks at me, or when he doesn’t look at me. I’m sad when he smiles at me, or when he doesn’t smile at me. I’m sad when he is here around me, or he isn’t. Why I’m so sad? Because I love him so much. Eventhough I love him, but I can do nothing. There is Vinessia. But it would be better, I’m sad, than not having him here,” answered Enjola and began cried.

Vano speechless. Now he knew how much Enjola loved Geno. And, he gave up for get Enjola. Then, Vano went to met Geno and asked the same question as Enjola’s.

“I love her. I don’t understand why she hate me. Yes, I have ever hate her, because she doesn’t want to go to the train station when I’m leaving her in the past time. But I can’t and I don’t wanna let my heart hate the girl I loved since eight years ago,” answered Geno and began cried.

“I’d love to look at her face. I’d love to smile at her. You know? I have smiled at her for about a thousand times, but she never replied my smiling. It’a hurt! I always ask myself what’s wrong with me. And I’d love to have a conversation with her. But she rarely respon me. I’d love to do everything with her. I have tried,” he can’t stop his tears.

“When I’m not here, everyday is just a nightmare. I can’t see her face with all her expressions. I can’t hear her voice. I miss her. I hope everymorning I wake up and everynight I fall asleep with her presence still. And tenderly telling me not to cry,” he cried.

Everything was going on just as always. Enjola and Vinessia got a better sister-relation. So Vinessia decided to gave Geno’s letter to her. Then Enjola read it.

“I don’t think I can go, if I see you. So I’m leaving you without say goodbye. I’m leaving you alone for now, but later I’ll hold your hand and take you to the moon and to the stars,” said Geno in his letter. Tears dropped from Enjola’s eyes. She kinda shocked.

“Don’t run away. Don’t go anywhere. Wait for me at home. I’m going to endure thinking that you will waiting for me and I hope that you will endure thinking for my coming back. I like you, Enjola. You are the one I like the most in this whole world. If I’m parting with you now for a short time, I want to write you a letter like this, pound your heart. Enjola, I’ll pass a bridge, that there’s no way to come back. I don’t want to go. Stop me, Enjola! Will you stop me? If you stop me, surely I won’t go,” asked Geno in his letter’s ending.

Enjola ran to their special room. She cried there. She couldn’t stop her heavy tearsdrop.

“He said if I stopped him, he would have stopped then. I, I regret have ever hate him! I think he left me. Why and how it can be happen? How, how I tell my heart? He, he is the boy I loved since eight years ago,” said Enjola stammerly.

“Why Vinessia didn’t give me Geno’s letter?” Enjola just asked.

“Enjola,” Geno shouted.

Actually, Geno was there without Enjola’s knowing. He has just heard all of Enjola’s sayings. He began cried.

“Enjola. Sorry. I don’t that Vinessia didn’t give my letter to you.” Geno said. And then he speechless. But finally he repeated,,

“Enjola. I don’t understand why you hate me. Yes, I have ever hate you, because you didn’t go to the train station when I’m leaving you in the past time. But I can’t and I don’t wanna let my heart hate you, the girl I loved since eight years ago. I’d love to look at your face. I’d love to smile at you. You know? I have smiled at you for about a thousand times, but you never replied my smiling. It’a hurt! I always ask myself what’s wrong with me. And I’d love to have a conversation with you. But you rarely respon me. I’d love to do everything with you. I have tried. When I’m not here, everyday is just a nightmare. I can’t see your face with all your expressions. I can’t hear your voice. I miss you. I hope everymorning I wake up and everynight I fall asleep with your presence still. And tenderly telling me not to cry,” continued Geno.

“You know? I’m sad when you look at me, or when you don’t look at me. I’m sad when you smile at me, or when you don’t smile at me. I’m sad when you are here around me, or you aren’t. Why I’m so sad? Because I love you so. Eventhough I love you, but I can do nothing. But it would be better, I’m sad, than not having you here,” Enjola said.

“I have waiting for this timing like this for a long time,” said Geno.

“Whenever I would turn my head. There would be you someone I loved since eight years ago, who lift my spirit. I don’t dare to hope for everything. No matter where I went. If you are here with me, that’s enough for me,” Enjola ended.

The tears dropped so heavy over their own faces. They cried together and full with Love together.

*adaptedfrom:cs

Song For You

Halooo J. Mau tampil beda dikit nih. Postingan kali ini emang dari lirik lagu. Tapi nggakpapa dong ya. Ini salah satu lagu Korean kesukaanku. Liriknya aku buat ke Hangeul, itu loh huruf Korea. Bukannya sok pinter apa gimana, tapi aku lagi giat-giatnya mengasah kemampuan aku di tulisan Hangeul. Bisa aja sih, aku langsung copas lirik beserta huruf Koreanya dari Google, kan banyak tuh. Tapi aku maunya yang buatanku sendiri. Biar salah, nggakpapa. Kalo emang gamau nge-credit lirik yang salah, ya gapapa. Yang aku tau, ya itu yang aku posting. Tau gak? Ini aja banyak yang salah penulisannya, karena emang pengejaan atau pemisahan setiap silabel huruf Hangeul itu agak ribet. Contohnya, kalau Indonesia, kata “makan” disukukatain jadi ma-kan. Nah, kalau Hangeul, bisa aja mak-an. Makanya ribet, hehehe. Nah, kalo ada reader yang lebih pinter dari aku, kasih tau dong dimana letak kesalahannya, supaya aku bisa memperbaikinya. Otte?

Oiaa, sengaja aku buat lirik lagu ini, karena lirik lagunya sederhana, belum susah-susah amat. Terus, ada pengulangan dimana-mana, makanya untuk pemula kayak aku, berlatihnya pake lirik yang ini aja dulu.

SONG FOR YOU

By : SoYeon T-Ara ft. Ahn Young Min

Neoreul saranghae, nan neoreul saranghae

너를 사랑해, 난 너를 사랑해

Jeo haessari, jeo byeolbichi

저 했아리, 저별비치

Da hanneun  nalkaji

따  하는날카지

Nae son jabajullae, manheun sewori jinado

네 순 자바줄래, 만흔 서워리 지나도

I love you, ni pume kkok anajullae

I love you, 니 품에 꼭 않아줄래

Neoege nan

너에게 난

Neoege nan eotteongeoni

너에게 난 어떤건이

Jami deulttaemada nan geuge gunggeumhaejo

자미 들때마다 난 그게 궁금해조

Naege  neon

내게 넌

Naege neon bomingeoya

내게 넌 봄인거야

Ttaseuhadorok nal anajun neoya

때스하도럭 날 안아준 너야

Neo ttaemune (haengbokhangeol)

너 때문에 (행복칸걸)

Neo ttaemune (nan utneungeol)

너 때문에(난 욷는걸)

Neo ttaemune nan saneungeol (neol bomyeon joheungeol)

너 때문에 난 사는걸 (널 봄연 조흔걸)

Yeongwontorok namanui yeonini doejwo (yeonini doejwo)

영원토롴 나마늬 여니니 더줘 (여니니 더줘)

Namanui byeori doewjo

나마늬 벼리 더줘

Neoreul saranghae, nan neoreul saranghae

너를 사랑해, 난 너를 사랑해

Jeo haessari, jeo byeolbichi

저 했아리, 저별비치

Da hanneun  nalkaji

따  하는날카지

Nae son jabajullae, manheun sewori jinado

네 순 자바줄래, 만흔 서워리 지나도

I love you, ni pume kkok anajullae

I love you, 니 품에 꼭 않아줄래

Neoege nan

너에게 난

Neoege nan mueosini

너에게 난 무어시니

Gireul geotdagado nan mundeuk gunggeumhaejyeo

기를 걷다가도 난 문득 궁금해져

Naege neon

내게 넌

Naege neon dalbichiya

내게 넌 달비치야

Eodumsogeosseo nal bichwojun neoya

어둠소겄어 날 비춰준 너야

Neo ttaemune (haengbokhangeol)

너 때문에 (행복칸걸)

Neo ttaemune (nan utneungeol)

너 때문에(난 욷는걸)

Neo ttaemune nan saneungeol (neol bomyeon joheungeol)

너때문에난 사는걸 (널 봄연 조흔걸)

Yeongwontorok namanui yeonini doejwo (yeonini doejwo)

영원토롴 나마늬 여니니 더줘 (여니니 더줘)

Namanui byeori doewjo

나마늬 벼리 더줘

Neoreul saranghae, nan neoreul saranghae

너를 사랑해, 난 너를 사랑해

Jeo haessari, jeo byeolbichi

저 헷사리, 저별비치

Da hanneun  nalkaji

따 한는날카지

Nae son jabajullae, manheun sewori jinado

네 순 자바줄래, 만흔 서워리 지나도

I love you, ni pume kkok anajullae

I love you, 니 품에 꼭 않아줄래

Seulpeun naldo itgetjiman

슬픈 날도 잍겥지만

Himdeun naldo itgetjiman

힘든 날도 잍겥지만

Nan neoui gyeoteseo jikyeoljulge

난 너의 겨테서 지켤줄게

Saranghandago (saranghandago)

사랑한다고 (사랑한다고)

Nal saranghandago (saranghandago)

닐 사랑한다고 (사랑한다고)

Jeo haneure jeo badae

저 한으레 저 바다에

Keuge eochyeojullae (Keuge eochyeojullae)

크게 어쳐줄레 (크게 어쳐줄레)

Neol wihae bureuneun

널 외해 부르는

I noraereul deureojullae (I noraereul deureojullae)

이 노래를 드러줄래 (이 노래를 드러줄래)

I love you, yeongwonhi neol saranghallae

I love you, 영원히 널 사랑할래

Gimana? ada saran nggak?

Resensi Karangan

Jadi begini, saya menemukan sebuah karangan, berupa narasi, pada soal ujian Mid Semester Genap kurang lebih 2minggu lalu. Entah mengapa aku menyukai karangan itu. Nah, kali ini saya ingin membuat resensi singkat mengenai kedua karangan tersebut. Hitung-hitung saya belajar buat resensi, minimal ceritalah seperti di bawah ini. Karena dulu, juga pernah disuruh buat resensi, tapi saya merasa agak sulit pada waktu itu. Sekarang dilatihnya.

Karangannya berjudul “The White Butterfly”. Narasi ini menceritakan seorang lelaki tua yang tidak mau menikah lagi seumur hidupnya demi menjaga kesetiaannya kepada calon istrinya dulu yang meninggal sebelum mereka menikah. Dan kini si istri menampakkan wujudnya dalam rupa seekor kupu-kupu putih kepada keponakan laki-lakinya karena si lelaki tua tersebut sedang sekarat akibat sakit. Tetapi akhirnya si lelaki tua itu pun meninggal dengan kesetiaannya yang tetap Ia jaga.

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The White Butterfly

          And old man named Takaham lived in a little house behind of the temple of Sozanji. He was extremely friendly and generally liked by his neighbor, though most of them concidered him a little mad. That was because he was very old but he did not want to get married. He did not have desire for intimate relationship with women.

          One summer day he become verey ill, so ill, in fact, that sent for his sister-in-law and her son. They both came and did all they could to bring comfort during his last hours. While Takaham fell asleep, they watched a large white butterfly  flew into the room and rested  on the old man’s pillow. The young man tried to drive it away a fan, but it came back three times, as if it was very loath to leave the suffer.

At last Takaham’s nephew chased it out intothe garden, trough the gate, and into the cemetery beyond, where it lingered over a waman’s tomb, and then mysteriously dissappeared. On examing the tomb, he found the name “Akiko” written upon it, together with a description narrating how Akiko died when he was eighteen. Though the tomb was covered with moss and must have been erected fifty years previously, the boy saw that it was surrounded flower, and that the little water tank had been recently fillled.

          When the young man returned to the house he found that Takahama had passed away, and he returnes to his mother and told her whaat he had seen in cemetary.

          “Akiko?” murmured his mother. “When your uncle was young he has betrothed to Akiko. She died shortly before her wedding day. When Akiko left this world, your uncle resolved never to marry, and to live ever near her grave. For all these years, he was remained faithfull to his vow, and kept in his heart all the sweet memories of his one and only one love. Everyday Takahama went to the cemetery, wheter the air was fragrant with summer brezee or thick with falling snow. Everyday he went to her grave and prayed for her happiness, swept the tomb and set flower there. When Takaham was dying, and he could no longer perform his loving task, Akiko came for him. That white butterfly was her sweet and loving soul.”

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Nah itulah ceritanya. Cerita yang sangat bagus menurut saya. Mampu membuat saya merinding, saya pribadi, heheh. Sebenarnya cerita yang menceritakan tentang seseorang yang tidak mau menikah lagi karena pasangannya lebih dulu meninggal, sudah sangat biasa dan telah menjamur. Tetapi ada daya tarik tersendiri yang dimiliki cerita ini, bukan? Mungkin karena struktur setiap kalimatnya sangat bagus (struktur yang sulit menurut saya) sehingga menambah nilai maknanya.

Kadang struktur yang tidak biasa, mampu membuat suatu karangan menjadi lebih indah. Contohnya : kita biasanya mengetahui arti bahasa Inggris “tidak dapat melakukan” adalah “can’t do something”. Tetapi perhatikan kalau kita menggunakan “can do nothing”, kan terlihat lebih indah dan berseni. Begitu juga pada narasi ini. Seperti “He did not have desire for intimate relationship with women,”, sebenarnya bisa saja penulis membuat “He didn’t wanna have a marriage anymore”.

Pemilihan kata yang sangat jempolan! Terkadang dalam bahasa Inggris, penggunaan kata yang tidak biasa, pengganti kata (ungkapan), yang tergolong sulit, justru memberi kesan yang sangat baik. Misalnya, “mimpi buruk” berarti “bad dream”, tetapi alangkah baik kalau diganti dengan “nightmare”, bukan? nah semua itu, dimiliki narasi ini. Terdapat di, “He did not have desire for intimate relationship with women,” (desire artinya keinginan) bisa saja penulis membuat “He did’t wanna intimate relationship with women. Tetapi penulis lebih memilih untuk menggunakan desire, dan sangat tepat! Lagi, “While Takaham fell asleep, they watched a large white butterfly  flew into the room and rested  on the old man’s pillow”, (rested;rest berarti terbaring;tidur;terletak), penggunaan rested pada kalimat itu menimbulkan kesan bahwa kata itu memiliki majas personifikasi, sehingga kita bisa menyimpulkan bahwa kata rested berarti hinggap, karena untuk si kupu-kupu. Lagi, penulis lebih sering meggunakan cemetery dan tomb dibanding dengan grave untuk mengartikan kuburan.  Lagi, “ the young man tried to drive it away a fan”, di sini penulis ingin mengartikan “orang muda itu mencoba untuk mengusirnya (si kupu-kupu) dengan sebuah kipas” dan yang mengesankan, penulis memakai kata drive yang sebenarnya artinya mengedarai. Sama hal dengan rested tadi, menimbulkan kesan yang tidak biasa. Lagi, “Though the tomb was covered with moss and must have been erected fifty years previously”, kebanyakan biasanya kita akan membuat fifty years ago, bukan? Naaah. Dan terakhir, “When Akiko left this world,” bisa saja diganti dengan had passed atau died. Saya yakin kalian setuju, kan? Sangat mengesankan.

Pada narasi ini juga terdapat kalimat yang sebenarnya sudah sangat jelas, tetapi tetap dijelaskan lagi, yang menurut saya memberi bilai tambah makna. Akan saya tunjukkan. Terdapat di, “Everyday Takahama went to the cemetery, wheter the air was fragrant with summer brezee or thick with falling snow.” Sudah tercantum setiap hari! Kalau sudah dikatakan setiap hari, berarti tidak ada satu hari pun yang terlewatkan, bukan? Naah, tetapi masih juga dijelaskan wheter the air was fragrant with summer brezee or thick with falling snow (walaupun udara harum dengan wangi musim panas atau tebal dengan salju). Lagi, “When Takaham was dying, and he could no longer perform his loving task”, ya ampun! Siapa pun tau, kalau sudah meninggal, tak akan bisa lagi menunjukkan cintanya. Jangankan menunjukkan cintanya, bernapas saja pun sudah tidak bisa lagi. Tetap saja dijelaskan lagi. Tapi itulah yang mantap! Benar dan nyata.

Tetapi walaupun cerita ini sangat memuaskan, ada sedikit kejanggalan yang saya temukan. Seperti, “On examing the tomb, he found the name “Akiko” written upon it, together with a description narrating how Akiko died when he was eighteen.”, bukankah itu janggal? description narrating, menimbulkan makna un-identify, sudah description, narrating lagi.

Selain itu, penulis memakai beberapa kata yang sungguh sulit. Memang, seperti yang saya katakan di atas, bahwa terkadang kata yang sulit itulah justru yang bagus. Tapi kasus ini sudah berbeda. Amatilah! Kata loath, sufferer, dan lingered, yang saya sendiri tidak begitu tau apa artinya yang sebenarnya.

Di sini, saya juga mengoreksi bahwa sebenarnya ada beberapa kalimat yang strukturnya perlu diubah agar lebih bagus. Tidak salah, tetapi perlu untuk memperindah narasi. Sebelum saya kasih tunjuk, saya ingin memberi tahu bahwa dalam bahasa Inggris, (setidaknya menurut saya) kalimat positif yang bermakna negatif lebih bagus dari kalimat negatif bermakna negatif, dan sebaliknya kalimat negatif bermakna positif dibanding kalimat positif bermakna positif. Contohnya: “I haven’t a friend” lebih bagus jika “I have no a friend”. Lagi, arti bahasa Inggris “tidak dapat melakukan” adalah “can’t do something”. Tetapi perhatikan kalau kita menggunakan “can do nothing”, kan terlihat lebih indah dan berseni. Nah, jadi kalimat yang bisa kita ubah antara lalin, “He did not have desire for intimate relationship with women.” kata bercetak miring dapat kita ganti menjadi have no.

tapi secara keseluruhan, karangan narasi ini bagus!